The Loan

Today I am joining  
The one word prompt is: Awkward.

The Loan
Jeff had a good thing, but didn’t appreciate it. 
Bob saw a good thing, and did.
Bob said, “Let me borrow twenty bucks to take her out on a date.” 
Jeff replied, “She won’t go, but if she does keep the twenty bucks.”
He never had to repay the loan.

22 thoughts on “The Loan

  1. I just knew this was the perfect spot for your writing talents, Annie. You are so very good at careful crafting with words. This was a truly delightful story, impossible not to smile at the end! Great job, Annie at her best! 🙂


  2. I love your story, you have packed so much into 5 short sentences and nothing more needs to be added.
    I look forward to reading more of your writing.
    And thanks for the kind comment on my story. 🙂


  3. This is the perfect prompt for your busy week … short and sweet and to the point. Do you think the Jeff's in the world would get it … I doubt it, but we do. Awesome, Awesome, Annie. This is more like you … I like that your are getting more into your writing 🙂



  4. Awesome way to get the most across in the least space. That's not easy to do, but you did it perfectly!! Nice job 🙂 I'm so glad you've joined in on Five Sentence Fiction this week. Look forward to reading more of your writing.


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